Rose & Thorn Journal  -  Winter 2010
Ava Leavell Haymon’s collection of poems, Why the House Is Made of Gingerbread, will be published this spring by Louisiana State University Press. Her poems have been published in Poetry, The Southern Review, Ploughshares, The Northwest Review, The Sun, and others; in five chapbooks from five different independent publishers; and in two previous full length collections from LSU Press, Kitchen Heat and The Strict Economy of Fire. She teaches poetry writing in Louisiana and in New Mexico, where she is director of Guadalupe Mesa Studios.

Ava Leavell Haymon


 

The Riddle

 

Trying once again to produce

a butter cream—cool room, cool

crockery, wooden spatula, wooden spoon—

 

the girl forgot the witch and imagined

the taste in the boy’s mouth.

Under her hands she felt the sugar

relinquish its crystal grit

 

without dissolving, and the butter,

without melting, relax its waxy

resistance. Butter and sugar

disappeared, and there it was

 

at last—the smooth paste, neither solid

nor liquid, somewhere in between.

Keep your fingers out! Hard slap,

like the stepmother’s.

 

Gretel’s blazing cheek asked a new question:

What if I try hard enough? Learn everything?

Without taking a single taste, produce the cake

that makes the boy smile and grow fat?

 

Then she roasts Hansel in the fire

and dances all night in her dark garden.

I’ll be the only child here and no use to her

alive. The spoon was lifting

 

butter cream, perfect and undeniable.

Gretel’s grip loosened, and the spoon swung

sideways like the needle of a compass.

There is something more, she thought:

 

something the witch will never teach me.

A riddle of kitchens, so plain

I can’t see it, the answer lodged

physical as gristle in the riddle itself.

 

Her wrist dropped,

spoon plopped into bowl.

Perfect apprentice, heroine girl,

the complete cook must learn to kill.

 


 

The First Wish

 

Knowing the sugar house

dangerous, even evil, Gretel walked

toward it. After long enough in the woods,

 

any house of your own kind seems a shelter.

They had seen dens, lair, deer huddles,

small round nests of finches.

 

An adult might think these sweet,

her eyes go soft when she fumbles

onto little wads of flannel and hay

 

the brown mouse lays down in the firewood

or a cocoon webbed soft to a stem in the weeds.

But a child, her hands chapped and cold,

 

a child without a mother has no luxury

of sentiment—finding such things,

she sees only the eggs she might eat

 

if she's desperate enough by that time,

or the return of another female

to run at her with claws or slapping wings.

 

The smell of baking paralyzed

Gretel’s good sense, fondant

congealing from clear to snow,

 

a house cooking itself up

before her eyes, because her eyes

fixed on it. Hansel, in his headlong way,

 

had crashed through the willow break

at the clearing’s edge, grabbing for candy

curlicues, yelling out her name.

 

One step, another, her face slackening

into a baby’s. Houses could be warmth,

could be safety, company, soft dry beds.

 

But this one was food.

The first wish.

Food.

 

 


Everygirl’s Mandala

 

First, a large gold circle on the page,

drawn freehand. Someone told her to begin

that way, and Gretel is nothing

if not obedient. Inside the circle,

 

she draws a lopsided cube, brown,

adds a roof on top, triangle and plane:

a little house, a gingerbread house.

And Gretel feels its pull

 

on a hungry child, the bite of her own desire

for sweets, forbidden sweets. She smudges

white over red for peppermint shingles,

and the house begins to hiss: No recipe

 

will ever satisfy this desire. Its name,

shame, the ultimate disobedience, fat.

Her breathing shallow, Gretel draws stick bodies

with circle heads, wobbling away from her

along gingersnap stepping stones.

The twin children are a surprise,

like pleated paper, scissor-cut,

unfolding all at once into paper dolls.

 

Above their heads, Gretel scribbles

massed leaves, ponderous tree trunks.

Thick roots lower a great bulk

down past the circle, purple darkens

 

the sky. The gold circle

is almost gone. Gretel’s secret:

sugar melted to dark brown,

butter stirred in, and she, bent over

the kitchen counter lightheaded,

 

nauseated, mood shuffling from stupid

to cranky, no trace in sink or refrigerator.

Gretel blackens the inside edge of a shadow

and wonders: Where is the witch?

 

Inside the house looking out? Hiding behind trees,

cackling under her breath that her bait has attracted

its prey? Is she in the sky somehow, sailing back

from who knows where to witness this arrival?

 

And then Gretel sees her—her two eyes

are the round heads of the lost children,

her jagged nose line cuts through

the hands they hold tight. Below that,

 

the last curve of gold smirks into a mouth.

Gretel squeezes the red crayon in her fist,

stabs preschooler zigzags for teeth.

She squints and sees all the rest—

 

black eyebrows bristle desperate auras

above the little heads, coarse hair flails

out past the edge of the page.

Gretel blinks:

 

Two pictures float without touching.

The first one sketchy, a house

in the woods, red-pink peppermints

smeary on the roof, lost girl and boy.

 

The second, in hard distinct lines,

a witch’s face hanging free,

stark as a wire mobile twisting

on its string. That face, swinging

 

on its own—is it looking in at the children,

clutching each other and tottering forward

on stiff little legs? Gretel can see it that way,

see through the back of the witch’s head

 

to the scene unfolding in the clearing,

to the children she planned to cook and eat.

But Gretel knows that’s false. It’s drawn

the way anyone draws a face, even a smiley face

 

on a dusty table. Those eyes boring crazy

out the backs of the children’s coin-round heads,

squiggle of scarlet at the corner

of the awful mouth:

 

The witch is looking straight out at her.

 







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